In this episode, the crew is prepping their shuttle. A beta reader said they imagined something like ones used in Star Trek. If you did too, I need to do a better job describing it! While I didn’t give an indication of size, I tried to convey that is old and dingy. But it is also huge (for a shuttle). They have to carry cargo back from the surface, don’t they?
I’d be interested in hearing your impression of the shuttle. Please share in the comments or reach out on Facebook or Twitter.
Another important part of this scene is showing even more how much Jemy really wants his alien stuff. The closer he gets, the more it drives him. Should he have listened more to RJ? Only time, and more episodes, will tell.
I guess you’ll just need to keep coming back to find out!
Episodes slowed to every other Wednesday the last few weeks, but I’ll be posting every Wednesday from now on. If life goes to plan, I might even post more frequently. But no promises!
